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Reviewing “Outlining Your Novel”

K.M. Weiland’s book, “Outlining Your Novel” is a wonderful resource for writers. She proposes a program where most of the hard work is done before we begin our first word. We design the plot, characters and scenes through brainstorming, planning and hard work.

Like an architect, we build the house on paper, so we can easily construct it on the property. When we finish the planning stage, we will have a clear destination in mind.

Writers can become lost in the morass of their imagination and produce a disjointed first draft that requires massive revisions and heartache. Why not save the stress and pain relievers by outlining?

Weiland is cognizant of the need for fresh ideas and allows writers the option of deviating from their original plan. Our characters become living, breathing individuals with a measure of freewill. They have to go their own way, sometimes. Accordingly, she provides input on how to let our characters blaze new paths while retaining our own vision. Some characters do need a leash, after all.

“Outlining Your Novel” is a treasure for aspiring and experienced writers that will be retrieved again and again.

Review of Bruce Morton’s “Deceiving Winds.”

Technology advances, yet man stays the same. The problems of God’s people in the past, return in new clothes to do battle again in a new age.

Bruce Morton’s book, Deceiving Winds asks, “Is the Church adapting to remain relevant to our culture or are we simply repeating the abuses of worship in ancient Ephesus?”

Morton’s subtitle says: “Christians Navigating the Storm of Mysticism, Leadership Struggles and Sensational Worship.”

Morton’s extensive research brings Ephesus to life for modern readers. Their culture is examined in light of modern America and the challenges facing the Lord’s church.

Morton does good work in this book and his attention to detail adds to the body of knowledge available to students of Ephesians.He helps his readers maneuver the choppy waters of the emerging church movement and mysticism.

He uses a nautical theme from time to time to make his points. This is appropriate since the strengths of Deceiving Winds lie fore and aft. That is, the best parts of the book are the introduction and the appendices where the author focuses on his research of archaeology and the work of scholars in the field. These sections are worth the price of the book for students of God’s Word.

In these sections, Morton is confident, comfortable and concise. Yet, in between, he becomes a different writer. He is less assured and his writing begins to meander. In the body of the book, he feigns discussing social issues but his approach is too timid for the controversial subject matter. It lacks crispness and focus.

For these reasons, I can recommend Bruce Morton’s book on an academic level. However, for popular reading for the general public, I am hesitant due to the conciliatory tone of material that begs for assertiveness. If only the entire book had the resolve of the introduction and appendices.

 

 

Review of “Love on Assignment” by Cara Lynn James

Review by Deirdre Mansel
Love on Assignmentis an historical romance set in 1900 in Newport, Rhode Island. Charlotte Hale is given an undercover assignment by her ruthless boss with the promise that she would be promoted to reporter if she is successful in finding incriminating information against professor Daniel Wilmont. All the while posing as a governess to his two children.  Within the walls of Summerhill Charlotte instead finds love, forgiveness and a deepening faith.The characters of Mrs. James’s novel are somewhat underdeveloped. Charlotte is the strongest of the main characters and James presents her as feisty, resourceful and outspoken. Charlotte is driven to achieve her dream of being a reporter in the Gilded Age, an occupation dominated by men.

Daniel Wilmot is a man who is stuck in his past and in the pain of discovering his deceased wife’s infidelity. Daniel’s life has been dominated by his dominating mother who wishes to control whom Daniel will marry. His resolve to find his own path in life grows in tandem with his blossoming love for the governess. Meanwhile, his mother seeks the means to have her dismissed and send her packing back where she belongs.The impact of the opening chapter fails to grab the reader’s attention and the suspense is ineffective through the first half of the novel. The action picks up toward the end and builds to the predictable and somewhat unrealistic conclusion. The writer also does not paint a clear picture of the setting even with her limited descriptions of architecture and transportation. She fails to make the reader feel as though they have stepped back in time to the Gilded Age.

Love on Assignment is an enjoyable read that presents ample opportunities for discussion of the topics of integrity, forgiveness, and the development of spiritual character. This is the author’s first novel although it is the second in a serious of books and I look forward to reading other novels by Cara Lynn James.

A Review of “Walking the Narrow Road” by Kathleen Cobb

By Douglas Kashorek

[EDITOR'S NOTE: Douglas Kashorek's book, Kin of Cain, has been released and I hope you will check it out. I appreciate his guest review.]

A new Christian, Jeff Lawson, is falsely accused of assault and attempted rape and imprisoned with the dregs of society, including one notorious leader, Big Jack.

Who framed Jeff? Did the dangerous brothers of Big Jack beat Jeff senseless, breaking several ribs when they heard of Jeff’s conversion?  Or, was it Jeff’s materialistic former girlfriend who feels spurned?

Several of his college soccer teammates or former friends who had joined him in worldly exploits in his former life, feel betrayed.  Or, perhaps it was his coworker at the small grocery store who blames Jeff Lawson for him getting fired and has vowed to get even with Jeff.

Kathleen Cobb’s first work, Walking the Narrow Road, is not a typical Christian romance novel. While learning about his new faith, Jeff must count on his new Christian girlfriend, Lisa Byers, to believe in his conversion and innocence. Moreover, he needs her and her friends to help him investigate, compiling the suspects and evidence which will point to the real criminal, so Jeff’s name can be cleared.

This isn’t Scooby-Doo according to Karen Kingsbury or Tracie Peterson, however. Instead of unmasking the monster, Jeff and Lisa work to change the hearts of their persecutors – even when she is kidnapped like Daphne, by the villain.

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Review of “Choose!” by J. Randal Matheny

Books come in different forms and serve various purposes. Some books are read, then shelved so they can be retrieved during times of difficulty. Like poems and Psalms, they wrap us in a protective coat and inspire us to persevere. With wisdom and guidance, they offer us a gentle push and help change our perspectives on life.

J. Randal Matheny’s book, Choose! 13 Choices to Transform Your Heart and Soul is one such book. It is a short but powerful book of devotional thoughts designed to spur our thinking and help us develop a healthier outlook on our daily lives.

[Read my interview with Randal]

Matheny writes about personal responsibility, which is desperately needed in our age. Too many people think that our life’s trajectory cannot be changed and we are stuck with misery.

Matheny asks us to choose better climes. He writes, “You have options. Your choices can transform your life. You’re not at the mercy of impersonal forces. The key is the type of choice you make. This book will show you great possibilities within your reach by focusing on choices within your control.”

Choose! is concise and filled with fabulous quotes and well-chosen passages from Scripture to educate us in the choices we should make. We choose how we handle this life and Matheny wants to play a part in helping us make wise decisions. His layered approach is useful with commentary, quotes, Scripture and practical applications.

Make a wise decision and purchase Choose! today.

 

 

A Review of “Room” by Emma Donoghue

A voracious reader develops a tough skin. We find books that rise and fall in our eyes, as the story progresses. Often, we wade through less than satisfactory plots because we love to read and we wish to finish what we started.

We have our favorite writers but, being mortal, they need time to get a new book to market. Meanwhile, we seek out new authors, hoping they will be a winner. It is often like panning for gold, hoping you find that one treasure. Yet, you know that you will find more pyrite than gold.

Book reviews are essential to the reader’s search. In a recent Amazon prowl of new fiction, I came across a very well-received novel from 2010 called  Room by Emma Donoghue.  I investigated it, secured it from the library and soon realized I had found the elusive gold nugget.  In my joy, I had to tell my readers.

At the age of 19, a woman is kidnapped and held hostage in a shed in an 11×11 room. Her prison has a bed, bathroom, wardrobe, TV, clock, small skylight and a rudimentary kitchen. She is never allowed to leave. Her captor, Old  Nick, comes to visit her at night and, in time, a son, Jack is produced. The boy grows up in the prison and Ma and Jack do everything they can to live a normal life in captivity. Old Nick occasionally brings them food and the barest necessities.

When Jack reaches the age of 5, having never seen Outside, Ma develops a plan to escape from her seven-year nightmare. Meanwhile, Jack is completely comfortable with the only world he has ever known.

How would you describe the outside world to a child who has never seen it? He thinks the entire outside world is in TV and can’t grasp that other humans live in reality.

The plots opens a vista of questions. Will they escape? If so, what will become of them? Will Jack be able to adapt to Outside? Will they be separated?

Donoghue writes in the voice of five-year old Jack and his observations of their world captivate the reader. Room is a disturbing, exciting and intellectually satisfying novel with a powerful eye for social commentary.

Entertainment  Weekly writes, “Though the story’s chilling circumstances reflect the horrors endured by tabloid-famous abductees, Donoghue avoids all sensationalism.”

Donoghue doesn’t unveil Ma’s past and how they came to be captives, except through hints in dialogue and through snippets of Jack’s thoughts. In that respect, Room has a marvelous pacing and texture.

The Irish Times says:

“Charming, funny, artfully constructed and at times almost unbearably moving, Donoghue mines material that on the face of it appears intractably bleak and surfaces with a powerful, compulsively readable work of fiction that defies easy categorization… Part childhood adventure story, part adult thriller, Room is above all the most vivid, radiant and beautiful expression of maternal love I have ever read. Emma Donoghue has stared into the abyss, honoured her sources and returned with the literary equivalent of a [great painting by one of the Masters]. This book will break your heart.”

Room is unforgettable and highly recommended.

Review of Douglas Kashorek’s “Kin of Cain”

In Kin of Cain, Douglas Kashorek updates the story of Beowulf and throws in a large dash of Scripture and Adirondack history. Kashorek is a skilled writer and storyteller and he has a bright future in literature.  Kin of Cain is his first novel.

Douglas Kashorek is the minister for the Plattsburgh church of Christ. Kashorek became an adjunct writing teacher at Clinton Community College in 2008. He has served as a book reviewer and features writer for Lake Champlain Weekly since 2010.

Read my interview with Kashorek.

Kin of Cain is a complex story that moves beyond the limitations of time and space. Utilizing the tools of Fantasy fiction, the complex story brims with action and suspense. Kashorek tells the story of Inez Crandall and her great-granddaughter, Sarah Crandall.

Escaping an abusive past and nightmares of killing her father, Sarah Crandall discovers her family’s history in Nod, east of Eden, through the strange Pass of Fire in the Great Depression Adirondacks. There, in the home of her ancestors built upon the foundation of Hrothgar’s hall, she fights the spirit of her great-grandmother waiting to possess her and the horror that loved her in centuries past.

In Enoch, the city built by Cain in rebellion to God’s curse to wander the earth, Sarah must choose to become ‘Adah’ of the Biblical prophecy or lose her life. Love, redemption, sacrifice, and the consequences of sin feature heavily in this twisted “Beauty and the Beast” tale that will leave you wondering if you are not also … kin of Cain.

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Review of “The Master’s Wall” by Sandi Rog

Sandi Rog’s novel, The  Master’s Wall,  recently won the 2011 Christian Small Publisher Book of the Year Award in the Fiction category. She deserved the award for her excellent work. Read my interview with her.

The Master’s Wall is a Christian novel that powerfully depicts the challenges that Christians faced in the early church in Rome. Persecution was a perpetual threat for God’s people in Rome. Rog’s research is readily apparent as her readers enter the harrowing world she describes.

Rog tells the story of young Alethea, the daughter of a wealthy, influential man, who meets and becomes fascinated with the handsome slave, David. They quickly develop a clandestine friendship that blossoms into forbidden love.

David is a Christian and wants to lead Alethea to Jesus. Yet, to accept his offer, Alethea would have to give up everything she has ever known.

Rog does not shy away from the plan of salvation. Her unabashed focus on Christ and the Scriptures is a refreshing example of what Christian fiction can accomplish.

She addresses the themes of love, betrayal, courage, obedience and friendship. Struggling to survive in a dangerous, violent world, David fights to gain his freedom from slavery through his strength and faith.

I heartily recommend this interesting, well-written novel to my readers.

Reviewing Paula Harrington’s “A Common Bond”

Paula Harrington’s new book,  A Common Bond, opens up preaching from the inside and allows her readers into this noble, challenging world. She interviews several well-known and talented preachers and leads them through a series of questions designed to help the world understand what it means to serve God in the ministry.

Harrington spent her formative years as a member of an extended family full of preachers. She saw firsthand the challenges that the families of ministers endure to serve the Lord.

With wisdom, wit and poignancy, the answers to Paula’s questions are certain to touch the heart of her readers. With God as the centerpiece of their lives, these men of God brave any obstacle to serve the Lord they passionately love.
For young preachers and their wives, this book is indispensable as they can gain a better understanding of their future. They learn which paths to take and which ones to avoid.

Paula’s own passion for God’s Word is evident in this book and for that, and the reasons above, I can recommend, A Common Bond for God’s people.

Paula writes for Forthright Magazine and the Fellowship Room. She can be found at her blog, Thinking Jesus

Review of Tim Downs’ “First the Dead”

Tim Downs’ book, “First the Dead,” is a compelling chapter in the series on Nick Polchak, forensic entomologist, also known as the “Bug Man.” He studies the bugs and insects that exist on dead bodies and can pinpoint when and where someone dies based on the age of the insects and their proliferation.

It sounds gross, but Downs does an excellent job of presenting the stories so they have a low queasiness factor.

His stories are filled with humor and witty repartee’. The Bug Man identifies more with bugs than he does humans. Downs’ books are under the heading of Christian fiction because they are clean and family-friendly.

In this book, Polchak joins experts helping with the Hurricane Katrina disaster in New Orleans. His orders are to take a boat and maneuver through the flooded city, rescuing survivors.

Nick soon discovers that someone has been killing people elsewhere and dumping them in the flooded city to cover their crimes. No one will believe his theory, so he goes rogue with his partners and a fourteen year-old boy that they rescue.

The killers, however, have different plans for Nick and his friends. Nick must investigate and solve the puzzle on his own, before it is too late. The result is a complex thrilled amidst the horrifying tragedy of Katrina and the savaging of New Orleans.

The entire series is enjoyable and I recommend them.

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