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The Road to Valencia

Jose had to keep walking. However, he needed another minute to rest. He wiped his brow with his soaked, red handkerchief and looked up at the blazing sun.

Shaking his head, he put his hat on and began to trudge forward.
He had been walking for hours. Soon, the day would begin its descent into darkness. Yet, his throbbing feet kept moving. Crows circled above, waiting for him to die. He tried to ignore them while his own stomach growled.

He had to get to Valencia. His muscles waged war against his will, but Jose still moved toward Valencia, his hope and strength.

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Alone

Gertie awakened into a world familiar and bleak. Her faded wallpaper and antiquated bed brought no cheer to her mornings. She put her feet on the faded carpet and met the day.

Walking down the hall to the bathroom, her younger brother threw a toy at her, hitting her in the side. She yelped and threw it back. She passed her parent’s room and saw her Mom sitting on the bed, digging in her sewing box.

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Christian Fiction Teaches Bible Lessons

I am using Christian fiction to teach Bible lessons instead of always using non-fiction in my columns.

It is common for Christian writers to begin with an illustration and then leave it to get to the meat of the Bible teaching. Carrying the illustration through the entire piece is not something I have read before, with any regularity. It has been well-received, so far.

I love writing these pieces. They come easily to me. I start with an idea and the story flows. I am slowly working on a novel, so this helps train me in this new genre.

Jesus used parables and stories, so there is a long history of using narrative to illustrate Biblical truth. Moreover, Christian fiction is huge right now. However, Christian short fiction is not as popular.

Here is a listing of what I have had published, so far.

The Road to Valencia

Memorial Day: Written in Charcoal

Wreckage

A Special Home

The Wife of Your Youth

Resurrection

Review of “Love on Assignment” by Cara Lynn James

Review by Deirdre Mansel
Love on Assignmentis an historical romance set in 1900 in Newport, Rhode Island. Charlotte Hale is given an undercover assignment by her ruthless boss with the promise that she would be promoted to reporter if she is successful in finding incriminating information against professor Daniel Wilmont. All the while posing as a governess to his two children.  Within the walls of Summerhill Charlotte instead finds love, forgiveness and a deepening faith.The characters of Mrs. James’s novel are somewhat underdeveloped. Charlotte is the strongest of the main characters and James presents her as feisty, resourceful and outspoken. Charlotte is driven to achieve her dream of being a reporter in the Gilded Age, an occupation dominated by men.

Daniel Wilmot is a man who is stuck in his past and in the pain of discovering his deceased wife’s infidelity. Daniel’s life has been dominated by his dominating mother who wishes to control whom Daniel will marry. His resolve to find his own path in life grows in tandem with his blossoming love for the governess. Meanwhile, his mother seeks the means to have her dismissed and send her packing back where she belongs.The impact of the opening chapter fails to grab the reader’s attention and the suspense is ineffective through the first half of the novel. The action picks up toward the end and builds to the predictable and somewhat unrealistic conclusion. The writer also does not paint a clear picture of the setting even with her limited descriptions of architecture and transportation. She fails to make the reader feel as though they have stepped back in time to the Gilded Age.

Love on Assignment is an enjoyable read that presents ample opportunities for discussion of the topics of integrity, forgiveness, and the development of spiritual character. This is the author’s first novel although it is the second in a serious of books and I look forward to reading other novels by Cara Lynn James.

A Review of “Walking the Narrow Road” by Kathleen Cobb

By Douglas Kashorek

[EDITOR'S NOTE: Douglas Kashorek's book, Kin of Cain, has been released and I hope you will check it out. I appreciate his guest review.]

A new Christian, Jeff Lawson, is falsely accused of assault and attempted rape and imprisoned with the dregs of society, including one notorious leader, Big Jack.

Who framed Jeff? Did the dangerous brothers of Big Jack beat Jeff senseless, breaking several ribs when they heard of Jeff’s conversion?  Or, was it Jeff’s materialistic former girlfriend who feels spurned?

Several of his college soccer teammates or former friends who had joined him in worldly exploits in his former life, feel betrayed.  Or, perhaps it was his coworker at the small grocery store who blames Jeff Lawson for him getting fired and has vowed to get even with Jeff.

Kathleen Cobb’s first work, Walking the Narrow Road, is not a typical Christian romance novel. While learning about his new faith, Jeff must count on his new Christian girlfriend, Lisa Byers, to believe in his conversion and innocence. Moreover, he needs her and her friends to help him investigate, compiling the suspects and evidence which will point to the real criminal, so Jeff’s name can be cleared.

This isn’t Scooby-Doo according to Karen Kingsbury or Tracie Peterson, however. Instead of unmasking the monster, Jeff and Lisa work to change the hearts of their persecutors – even when she is kidnapped like Daphne, by the villain.

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Review of Douglas Kashorek’s “Kin of Cain”

In Kin of Cain, Douglas Kashorek updates the story of Beowulf and throws in a large dash of Scripture and Adirondack history. Kashorek is a skilled writer and storyteller and he has a bright future in literature.  Kin of Cain is his first novel.

Douglas Kashorek is the minister for the Plattsburgh church of Christ. Kashorek became an adjunct writing teacher at Clinton Community College in 2008. He has served as a book reviewer and features writer for Lake Champlain Weekly since 2010.

Read my interview with Kashorek.

Kin of Cain is a complex story that moves beyond the limitations of time and space. Utilizing the tools of Fantasy fiction, the complex story brims with action and suspense. Kashorek tells the story of Inez Crandall and her great-granddaughter, Sarah Crandall.

Escaping an abusive past and nightmares of killing her father, Sarah Crandall discovers her family’s history in Nod, east of Eden, through the strange Pass of Fire in the Great Depression Adirondacks. There, in the home of her ancestors built upon the foundation of Hrothgar’s hall, she fights the spirit of her great-grandmother waiting to possess her and the horror that loved her in centuries past.

In Enoch, the city built by Cain in rebellion to God’s curse to wander the earth, Sarah must choose to become ‘Adah’ of the Biblical prophecy or lose her life. Love, redemption, sacrifice, and the consequences of sin feature heavily in this twisted “Beauty and the Beast” tale that will leave you wondering if you are not also … kin of Cain.

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Review of “The Master’s Wall” by Sandi Rog

Sandi Rog’s novel, The  Master’s Wall,  recently won the 2011 Christian Small Publisher Book of the Year Award in the Fiction category. She deserved the award for her excellent work. Read my interview with her.

The Master’s Wall is a Christian novel that powerfully depicts the challenges that Christians faced in the early church in Rome. Persecution was a perpetual threat for God’s people in Rome. Rog’s research is readily apparent as her readers enter the harrowing world she describes.

Rog tells the story of young Alethea, the daughter of a wealthy, influential man, who meets and becomes fascinated with the handsome slave, David. They quickly develop a clandestine friendship that blossoms into forbidden love.

David is a Christian and wants to lead Alethea to Jesus. Yet, to accept his offer, Alethea would have to give up everything she has ever known.

Rog does not shy away from the plan of salvation. Her unabashed focus on Christ and the Scriptures is a refreshing example of what Christian fiction can accomplish.

She addresses the themes of love, betrayal, courage, obedience and friendship. Struggling to survive in a dangerous, violent world, David fights to gain his freedom from slavery through his strength and faith.

I heartily recommend this interesting, well-written novel to my readers.

Sandi Rog Receives Great News

One of our author interviews was with Sandi Rog. Her book comes out November 1st and is available for pre-order. She recently was honored to be the book of the month for January, 2011, by the American Christian Fiction Writers Book of the Month Club. We rejoice with her success.

Katt Anderson shares her thoughts on Sandi’s success.

Writer’s Thoughts 9/9/10

Tips, Links, Quotes to Spur the Writer Into Action

“Planning to write is not writing. Outlining, researching, talking to people about what you’re doing, none of that is writing. Writing is writing” [E.L. Doctorow].

“Please don’t start your submissions letter by telling me how much I’ll love your book. Let your book do the selling” [Laura Anne Gilman].

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“If you read good books, when you write, good books will come out of you” {Natalie Goldberg].

“While thought exists, words are alive and literature becomes an escape, not from, but into living” [Cyril Connolly].

If we will think. expand our reading and vocabulary, we can always arrive at fresh ways to say things.

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“…your reader is at least as bright as you are.”  [William Maxwell].

Pre-Order Sandi Rog’s Book

Recently, I interviewed novelist Sandi Rog. Her new book is now available for pre-order and I wanted to give you a chance to have you own copy of The Master’s Wall.

She said about her book:

THE MASTER’S WALL is a historical novel that takes place in a villa outside of ancient Rome. Here’s a blurb:

He fights for his freedom. She fights for her life. Together, they fight for each other.

After watching Roman soldiers drag his parents away to their death, David, a young Hebrew, is sold and enslaved to serve at a villa outside of Rome. As David trains to become a skilled fighter, he works hard to please his master and hopes to earn his freedom. However, an opportunity to escape tempts him with its whispering call. Freedom beckons, but invisible chains hold him captive to the master’s granddaughter, an innocent girl with a fiery spirit. David vows to protect Alethea from his master, the murderous patriarch, and contrives a daring plan-sacrifice his own life to save hers.

Here’s what people are saying about it:

Can I just say “Wow!”? Or maybe “Stunning!”? I love stories set in the first century, and The Master’s Wall ranks as one of the best I’ve read to date. The characters are exactly what a reader wants-full of spirit, full of fire, full of temper that leads them into trouble . . . and faith that helps them through it. The setting is so richly portrayed that you’ll feel like you’ve donned a toga and are wandering through the villa.

Sandi Rog uses these gripping characters and stunning setting to execute a plot that will keep you guessing and dreaming and yearning along with Alethea and David. The Master’s Wall is so enthralling that it even haunted my dreams when I put it down halfway through-and you can bet I finished it the next day!

There’s so much I loved about it-the brutal reality of slavery depicted. The sweet hope of a girl whose innocence has been marred by tragedy. The enduring faith of a boy who determines to spread the Gospel, even in captivity. And when the depravity of man butts against the perfect will of God, you can bet there’s going to be a lot of conflict to keep those pages turning!

For lovers of Biblical and first century fiction, you will not want to miss this one! And for those unfamiliar with the genre but interested in history, pick up The Master’s Wall for a trip to Ancient Rome that will make it feel like home. This is one I’m going to be recommending to everyone I know.

—Roseanna M. White, author of A Stray Drop of Blood

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