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The Informed Writer

Links to various things that I think writers might find interesting. Since we are all different, we will not all agree. But, hey, what can you expect for free. :)

See my other Informed Writer posts for a bevy of links.

Why Reading is Good for your Brain

Nine images from Washington Irving books

An African-American young man asks what’s wrong with reading? The culture NEEDS to change

Literary Agent is Attacked by an Author who had his Manuscript Rejected

Ten Surefire ways to Succeed in Publishing

35 Fossil Words

The 2012 Man Booker Short List

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The Life of the Mind

“Live the full life of the mind, exhilarated by new ideas, intoxicated by the romance of the unusual.” (Ernest Hemingway).

The life of the mind is inward, dreaming, walking in another world. You become a new person and your mind is aflame with the brightness of your creation.

Every day you add to the corners, fleshing out the streets and neighborhoods and the people who walk there. You see into them and behind their veils where they hide their problems, weaknesses and secrets.

You respect them but find them exhilarating. Nevertheless, you back away to look again at a safer distance, picking up your brushes to paint.

Words spill out on the canvas before you–ideas, thoughts, fits and starts.

Skeletons become flesh, animated and dressed. They develop personalities, connections and boundaries. The vivacity of this new world envelopes you as the people of your mind live, love and breathe.

The life of the mind allows us to walk in our own mundane existence. We love the people here, our relationships and our work but the responsibilities and stresses of life stir our souls to another place.

We long for those stolen moments so we can return to the soil of our mind. We catch glimpses of it in store windows and on the panels of passing trucks.

We dream of merging our two worlds so we can be whole.

The written word allows that to happen. Get it down, shape, mold and polish until it’s ready to steal their imaginations. Produce something special so that your readers will mourn the sweet parting of the page as real life grumbles and beckons.

Walk there in your world and lead others to its shores. Read, write or scribble, anything to get the words from the canvas onto paper where they can live and breathe.

Think and see the world anew. Find the cracks in the cement, the turmoil in the lives of those you see.

Creation has a price but boundless opportunities. Live through its storms, sunsets and summer days.

Nourish your land and never stop dreaming and reading. The mind can starve without them and that would be tragic.

Writing Fiction is Easy and Very Difficult

Putting pen to paper and describing the scene in our head is easy. Stringing dialogue based on the way we speak is not challenging. However, forming everything together into a cohesive, compelling novel that publishers will consider publishing is quite a different matter, indeed.

Countless people aspire to write fiction and dream of accolades and glory. Friends and family read their offerings and praise their efforts. They start building houses in their head and plan the outfits they will wear to book signings.

Confident in their mastery, they send their masterpiece to someone knowledgeable about writing and hear that their manuscript is filled with mistakes and inconsistencies. They either become angry, crushed or ambivalent about the advice.

Why does this happen? Because writing fiction is easy and very difficult at the same time and the sooner we realize this, the better. Anyone can tell a story but doing so at the highest level takes an incredible amount of work.

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What is Literary Fiction?

My reading tastes have changed through the years. In elementary school I voraciously read biographies. The school library had these biographies with orange covers and I read every one they had.

As I grew older, I began reading horror. In high school, I would get my work done quickly and sit and read the remainder of the class period. I read countless novels in the genre through the years. In time, though, I moved on and stopped reading horror completely.

Then I moved to mysteries/thrillers and read hundreds of them until I became fairly well-versed in the genre. They read quickly and I enjoyed the puzzles.

When I finally decided I had wasted enough time dreaming about writing a novel, I began work on a manuscript. Accordingly, as the plot developed, my reading tastes changed again. I needed to broaden my horizons to fill in the gap.

I began reading more books by women and more romance so I could do a better job understanding female characters. As I began studying writing in earnest, the mystery stories I was reading began to look stale and drab.

I began to seek out better books with higher quality writing. That led me to literary fiction, a genre I had little knowledge of. When people asked me what genre I primarily read, it was hard to give them a firm answer. So I went in search of one.

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Christian Fiction Teaches Bible Lessons

I am using Christian fiction to teach Bible lessons instead of always using non-fiction in my columns.

It is common for Christian writers to begin with an illustration and then leave it to get to the meat of the Bible teaching. Carrying the illustration through the entire piece is not something I have read before, with any regularity. It has been well-received, so far.

I love writing these pieces. They come easily to me. I start with an idea and the story flows. I am slowly working on a novel, so this helps train me in this new genre.

Jesus used parables and stories, so there is a long history of using narrative to illustrate Biblical truth. Moreover, Christian fiction is huge right now. However, Christian short fiction is not as popular.

Here is a listing of what I have had published, so far.

The Road to Valencia

Memorial Day: Written in Charcoal

Wreckage

A Special Home

The Wife of Your Youth

Resurrection

Character Study 6/3/11

From time to time, I plan to post Character Studies to help us develop our writing skills and character development. Look at the photo and tell us about the person. What can we tell about them? What is their name? Age? Where do they live? Hobbies? What are they thinking? What else can you tell? The more we know about our characters, the better we will be.

A Review of “Room” by Emma Donoghue

A voracious reader develops a tough skin. We find books that rise and fall in our eyes, as the story progresses. Often, we wade through less than satisfactory plots because we love to read and we wish to finish what we started.

We have our favorite writers but, being mortal, they need time to get a new book to market. Meanwhile, we seek out new authors, hoping they will be a winner. It is often like panning for gold, hoping you find that one treasure. Yet, you know that you will find more pyrite than gold.

Book reviews are essential to the reader’s search. In a recent Amazon prowl of new fiction, I came across a very well-received novel from 2010 called  Room by Emma Donoghue.  I investigated it, secured it from the library and soon realized I had found the elusive gold nugget.  In my joy, I had to tell my readers.

At the age of 19, a woman is kidnapped and held hostage in a shed in an 11×11 room. Her prison has a bed, bathroom, wardrobe, TV, clock, small skylight and a rudimentary kitchen. She is never allowed to leave. Her captor, Old  Nick, comes to visit her at night and, in time, a son, Jack is produced. The boy grows up in the prison and Ma and Jack do everything they can to live a normal life in captivity. Old Nick occasionally brings them food and the barest necessities.

When Jack reaches the age of 5, having never seen Outside, Ma develops a plan to escape from her seven-year nightmare. Meanwhile, Jack is completely comfortable with the only world he has ever known.

How would you describe the outside world to a child who has never seen it? He thinks the entire outside world is in TV and can’t grasp that other humans live in reality.

The plots opens a vista of questions. Will they escape? If so, what will become of them? Will Jack be able to adapt to Outside? Will they be separated?

Donoghue writes in the voice of five-year old Jack and his observations of their world captivate the reader. Room is a disturbing, exciting and intellectually satisfying novel with a powerful eye for social commentary.

Entertainment  Weekly writes, “Though the story’s chilling circumstances reflect the horrors endured by tabloid-famous abductees, Donoghue avoids all sensationalism.”

Donoghue doesn’t unveil Ma’s past and how they came to be captives, except through hints in dialogue and through snippets of Jack’s thoughts. In that respect, Room has a marvelous pacing and texture.

The Irish Times says:

“Charming, funny, artfully constructed and at times almost unbearably moving, Donoghue mines material that on the face of it appears intractably bleak and surfaces with a powerful, compulsively readable work of fiction that defies easy categorization… Part childhood adventure story, part adult thriller, Room is above all the most vivid, radiant and beautiful expression of maternal love I have ever read. Emma Donoghue has stared into the abyss, honoured her sources and returned with the literary equivalent of a [great painting by one of the Masters]. This book will break your heart.”

Room is unforgettable and highly recommended.

For the Love of Writing

I am one of those people for whom writing is not optional. The urge is within me and it has its own mind, body and force of will. Holding it back would be akin to wielding a spoon against a flood. It will flow whether it has a voice or not because it is relentless and resilient.

I know how that sounds. Who would want a raging river in their heads, seeking an open door? It is not evil like the voices in the head of the disheveled lunatic raging at aliens. On the contrary, it is the daily reality of any truly artistic person.

It is said, “A writer writes.” This is true of artists and musicians because the art form is in every cell of their being and they have no choice but to express it. We control what we will do with the art form, but not whether it will pound on the door.

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The Writer Digs Within Their Soul

The writer who will not dig deep within their wells of pain for inspiration will never stir the passions of their readers. They must excavate their own fertile experiences and let it empower them to greater depths of understanding of the human condition. Without it, literature will never be more than trite confections.

We are individuals with shared experiences. By tapping into this resource within our own souls, we can circumvent the carefully constructed fortifications of the reader’s world and touch them at their core.  Once our core connects with theirs, passions are ignited.

The failure to challenge ourselves leaves untapped potential in our own personal wells.  Accordingly, we will never push ourselves to grow. If our writing doesn’t turn us inward, we will never truly reach the personal and protected areas of our readers.

Remember, everything has a  price, even timidity.

What is the Best Novel You Have Read?

I would love to hear about the best novel you have read.  Tell us why you think it is so wonderful. I look forward to your answers!

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